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Each day without you is a cut twice as deep.
Each second you're gone is a cause for me to weep
I've attempted to join you, up there
We had made the perfect pair.
The scars show how much I desire
To love you again, and rekindle the fire.
Why did you leave me, in such miserable woe?
I never wanted to let you go.
The most extreme of emptiness, resides in my heart
It kills me, remembering when you had to part
I miss your smell, your taste, and the nights we spent talking
Yet i loathed the day that death came knocking.
You were the one that kept me sane.
So why'd he take you? what did he gain?
I miss you so much,
And i long for your touch.
My sea of tears will drown me to death
©2005-2009 ~darkocrowluver
:icondarkocrowluver:

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i love it. today i was laughing my ass off trying to write the most emo poem i could. besides i gotta write one for miss walker. i think its fucking hilarious. oooh, i know the pain of the word, im fifteen years old i know what everything feels like. haha, hope you think its as funny as i do

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:icondoingtheunstuck:
:dance: awesome satire!

I stab myself....in the heart.....I die....bleh

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Sometimes you make me feel like I'm living at the edge of the world, like I'm living at the edge of the world. "It's just the way I smile" you said.

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